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You are the shadow that guides me through the day
Your beautiful black wings shield me from danger coming my way
When you are beside me I feel this warm sensation
When you smile I get this unholy temptation

Faithless, I'll adore you
A single touch, before I fade, painless let me pass through
It seems lately like you were suddenly taken
Because I suddenly feel alone and forsaken

Late at night I cry wondering why'd you leave me
The pain you inflicted me has wounded my heart deeply
But I finally see the bloody tears you have cried
And that he's broken you, a part of me just died

Sleep, sleep, my fallen angel I'm here to relieve the pain
I'll mend your wings, and forever shield you from the rain
I will always love you, but my love will always remain unspoken
But forever I'll admire your beauty, though your wings are broken.
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Well this is one of my first serious poems that I wrote in 10th grade. I truly hold this close to my heart so enjoy ^-^
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:clap: Bravo! <3 It's good :)
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~Shiore-Hikaru May 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much it means a lot to me :)
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*KawaChou Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh, this is amazing.
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~Shiore-Hikaru Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
thank you very much :iconbigmeowplz:
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*KawaChou Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It was beautiful! It's the least I can do! ^^
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~Shiore-Hikaru Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
You're too kind :thanks:
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*KawaChou Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm actually interested in your trilogy now that I look at your gallery. I think I'll start reading it. ^^
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~Shiore-Hikaru Apr 26, 2012  Student Writer
Oh you mean Moon's Curse? Well thank you very much oh and you might wanna check out some of the character art for Moon's Curse on either my favorites or on my friend and partner ~gymskoolgirl da page.
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*KawaChou Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have looked. Then thought maybe I should look when I start to get to know the story & characters
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~Shiore-Hikaru Apr 26, 2012  Student Writer
oh yeah that would be best. well I hope you enjoy :iconbigmeowplz:
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